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This is my first time writing smut to a lover. Thoughts? Corrections? I need your lips to do all the work at fist*, kissing and biting my neck, not just tasting me, devouring me inch by inch. I want to ride you, clothes on, and feel you get bigger under your pants. I get in my knees and undo your pants and take your cock in my throat, deep and wet. I stroke it with my tongue from balls to the tip of your dick.* I want you to tell me if I’m being good and how I can work harder, like I’m your assistant, sitting on your desk desperately waiting to be told what to do and fulfill. When you’re pleased enough, I’m going to undressed and write it slow and controlled* feeling you inside me until you can’t hold it any longer and you really wanna fuck me hard. I want you to pick me up and throw me on the bed and forcibly move me around with my head slightly off the bed and you shove your cock in my throat so far and we 69 you taste me fuck me with your tongue and fingers, squeeze my thighs, bite them. I wanna cum in your mouth. I wanna ask you to bend me over but you’ll have to correct me to say please. I want you to grab my hair and fuck me hard. Tell me how good I feel, and ask me if I like it and want more and correct me if I say something that doesn’t please you I want* you to use your hands while you fuck me, squeezing me until I bruise and finally you come inside me*.* submitted by /u/Claredom

Originally posted by u/Claredom on r/AskMen